What does your company, 1Rivet, do? A bit of info on who you are/your business will help to create something that matches your industry/target audience. Thanks!

Thanks just updated the brief and great catch - We are an IT consulting company but I provided more details in the brief.

Dear Project Owner,

I have done one mock-up for title page and section page. Please review the same and let me know your valuable feedback. Please tell me whether I am in the right track.

Regards
macroads

Hi there yes it looks interesting so far. I Think the key will be the divider slides both with and without pictures. We Are interested in a new refresh design. Also I think the content page will be good to see. Also the color theme we also please is critical to the success of this project. I have copied some images from the www.thenounproject.com which would look great colored in the new version.

Hello. I'm looking forward to your feedback on my designs. Please let me know if you have any changes you'd like to see. Thank you for your time.

Thanks for your feedback. I'll make other slides and show you shortly. Please wait for my designs

Regards
macroads

Hi. Are there any changes you'd like to see on my submissions? Thank you.

I have done other slides and submitted the same for your feedback. I can make any addition /modification based on your presentation content and your requirements.

Regards,
Macroads