Any feedback would be appreciated.

changed the brief. take a look.

Hello

I already submit my design.
Appreciate if you can give me feedback.

Thanks you.

Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
thanks.

Let me know if you need a revision if you still haven't picked a winner.

Hello,
i already submit my revision.
appreciate if you can give me feedback.
Thank you.

any feed back please