Simple move of the first word downward to indicate the position with very upscale font.

let me know your thoughts on it.

Hello Effektmedia,
The design is nice, however it is very simple. I do not mean any offence however it looks like a design which was put together in a number of seconds. If you wouldn't mind elaborating on the design, I may consider it.
Thank you

Revised designs submitted...

hi Mr
thanks for your reply
I hope that you like the design
We will be in touch if you like it