Hi,
I have submit my first proposal for your logo, so any feedback will be welcoming.

I sent you some feedback this morning ... hope my comments help

Hi

Thanks for your feedback., I have posted as per your requirements., lets check and know me if anything needed more to make sharper.,

Thanks

Thank you for your invite. have submitted the design, please go through and give the feedback or any changes required.
thank you.

Hi,

Thank you for the invite. I have just submitted a design and would greatly appreciate your feedback.

Kind regards,

Darren